Here’s some more of that awesome comic.
Here’s the next page. I also edited all the previous pages to make them more awesome based on a critique I had. I’ll post those later.
Here’s the next two Spirit Bond Thumbnails. Pretty messy. Making comics is hard. I have a lot to learn. I’m getting there, though.
Seriously. These are messy, icky thumbnails. I should, like…. learn how to make my quick pictures a little prettier. And more legible.
Here’s kind of what I’m thinking. I’m going back to starting the story with Kay and Kaipo like I did back in my first draft. It’s going to be great.
EDIT:
Here’s some new and improved stuff.
This is going to be page 1 of my comic. It’s the value test for it, anyway. I’m not totally satisfied, and I’m a bit mystified as to what to do with it when it comes to color, but I feel like it’s a decent start.